Chapter : Regarding some of the questions in Volume 3, if you have any questions, please take a look.
In the design of the first draft outline, Ivan and Esiah only met for a summer vacation. The relationship is not deep, and the character image is not full enough. Temporary death is acceptable.
One of the original intentions of this line is to use this matter to allow the protagonist of the traveler to completely recognize his identity and recognize the mother of Aisia!
In the original outline, Ivan should be guilty the most after Aysia's "death". After all, some things were triggered by him. He saved Aysia more because of his guilt!
However, your attitude later disrupted my plan, causing me to have to deepen the feelings written by the two...
The second purpose of writing this is to get acquainted with Sirius.
In the angel's expectation, in the third volume, they are two people who have lost some, because their respective purposes temporarily cooperated, and finally cared for and understood each other, and at the same time saved each other.
Sirius awakened from the abyss of hatred and regained his sanity, no longer taking revenge as the only goal of adult life.
Ivan regained his guilt and silence, and actively tried to reverse the past.
However, due to the previous mistake in judgment, the angel did not dare to write too harshly, and it was a failure in the end.
In addition, writing like this is also convenient for deepening the relationship line, worsening the relationship between the protagonist and Old Deng, revealing Ivan’s life experience through the perspectives of various parties, understanding the past of Dougt and Aisia, arranging some foreshadowings, etc...
The most important thing is to prepare for the task of controlling the werewolf and becoming the king of Knockdown Alley, so that the other main line of the book can smoothly continue the plot.
After all, after getting enough money with the character of the protagonist, he would go to the safer Diagon Alley instead of staying in Knock Down Alley. (Of course this money will be used for other purposes) There is no reason to be the king of Knockturn Alley...
The first volume of the book is the most satisfactory to the angels. Although the previous people have been scolded very badly, I don’t know how many people have abandoned the book because the protagonist chose Gryffindor and followed the plot in the early stage, but this is the only one that completely follows the outline. A volume written!
Not affected by any influence, all the foreshadowings were used, and dozens of chapters were used as a foreshadowing to proceed with the main line. The plot gradually transitioned from a relaxed daily life to a tense battle, and it truly did not write useless plots.
However, starting from the second volume, in view of the dissatisfaction of some book friends, the angel had to speed up the progress of the plot, which caused the plot to appear a little messy as a whole, and many of the paving chapters were cut off in this way.
Lockhart and Tom, the two people who used a lot of pen and ink to shape, hurriedly took the lunch, some of the plots did not achieve the desired effect at all.
So when the third volume was opened, the angel did not want to compromise, because that would only continue to destroy the integrity of the plot Angels have always believed that telling a story is more important than others...
This is also the reason why the angel is still not spoiled no matter how ruthless it is being sprayed by people, just to let you see the puzzle chapter, the perception can be better. (I also hope that everyone will not deliberately spoiler in the previous chapters, or be cryptic when talking about spoilers.)
But it is a pity that the angels still compromised. They solved the mystery in advance that Aysia’s body was disguised with a compound decoction, which also greatly lost the level of the subsequent puzzle-solving process...
According to the angel's previous prediction, this should be the most exciting and most important volume in the whole book, but after all, it still failed to write as expected.
So please be patient when reading the book, there is no plot that will not come back, and will not write about collapse...,
Finally, the angel would like to thank everyone for your support here,
It is every time you subscribe, every time you give a reward, and every time you vote that the angels will not be affected too much in the book review area, and keep writing them down as always...
Thank you so much!